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Right place, right time

I've always been a fan of William Shakespeare, who really is very good in spite of all the people who say he really is very good (unlike, for example, F. Scott Fitzgerald, who really is pretty mediocre in spite of all the people who say he really is very good).

I can't help but think, though, that the characters Hamlet and Othello were not tragic figures so much as people in the wrong place at the wrong time. Both plays would be quite different if those two characters merely switched places.

See, the deal with Hamlet is that he overthinks everything, whereas the deal with Othello is that he's rash and quick to judgement. Hamlet would never for even half a second have been fooled by Iago, whereas Othello would never for even half a second put up with his mom shagging his dad's murderer.

So. What would the plays look like if we swapped them around?

Othello Act III, Scene iii

IAGO: I do not like the office:
But, sith I am enter'd in this cause so far,
Prick'd to't by foolish honesty and love,
I will go on. I lay with Cassio lately;
And, being troubled with a raging tooth,
I could not sleep.
There are a kind of men so loose of soul,
That in their sleeps will mutter their affairs:
One of this kind is Cassio:
In sleep I heard him say 'Sweet Desdemona,
Let us be wary, let us hide our loves;'
And then, sir, would he gripe and wring my hand,
Cry 'O sweet creature!' and then kiss me hard,
As if he pluck'd up kisses by the roots
That grew upon my lips: then laid his leg
Over my thigh, and sigh'd, and kiss'd; and then
Cried 'Cursed fate that gave thee to the Moor!'

HAMLET: You know, you actually had me going there for a minute. But seriously, you are so full of shit. See, I actually talked to Cassio after that deal in the garden, and you know what? I totally don't believe you.

DESDEMONA: Dude, you rock.


Hamlet is even shorter after we do the swap.

HAMLET Act I, Scene ii

QUEEN GERTRUDE: Good Othello, cast thy nighted colour off,1
And let thine eye look like a friend on Denmark.
Do not for ever with thy vailed lids
Seek for thy noble father in the dust:
Thou know'st 'tis common; all that lives must die,
Passing through nature to eternity.

OTHELLO: Look, Mom. Look...er, Dad. This is ridiculous. Sorry, but I'm afraid I have to cut your heads off now.

(OTHELLO draws his sword, cuts off GERTRUDE'S HEAD and CLAUDIUS' HEAD.)

THE GHOST: Dude, you rock.


1 This line becomes even funnier when you consider that Othello is a Moor.

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( 9 comments — Leave a comment )
athelstan
Oct. 9th, 2008 08:55 pm (UTC)
Should that not be "Dude, thou rock"?
merovingian
Oct. 9th, 2008 09:04 pm (UTC)
Really, it should be in iambic pentameter,

"Yo dude, thou rockest like yon rockin' thing."

Edited at 2008-10-09 09:05 pm (UTC)
georgiamagnolia
Oct. 9th, 2008 08:57 pm (UTC)
dood, you rock

My Shakespeare professor would have LOVED those scenes, I can hear him rolling in his coffin laughing.
fionn_mcgreggor
Oct. 9th, 2008 08:59 pm (UTC)
lol - great afternoon pick me up. Dude, you rock.
delphinea
Oct. 9th, 2008 11:35 pm (UTC)
Beyond awesome!
indywind
Oct. 10th, 2008 12:36 pm (UTC)
Too true.

'Course, Shakespeare was the first well-known sitcom writer, and the very backbone of a sitcome is sticking people in situations where their character ensures they will make the wrong response, whether for tragedy or comedy. So.
big_sarah_yeti
Oct. 10th, 2008 12:58 pm (UTC)
Othello is truly wonderful and infuriating. I played Desdemona in a production of it once and I never quite got rid of that urge to shriek out "What are you doing?? Iago is a manipulative bastard!!".
Reminds me slightly of people who talk about soap operas as if it is real life. Hehe.
radiantbaby
Oct. 10th, 2008 01:03 pm (UTC)
This is the best thing ever.
zotmeister
Oct. 10th, 2008 03:31 pm (UTC)
You get an A+ by default - by de fault of their being no better grade to give. Dude, you rock. - ZM
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